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五七绝对联体诗

楼主:不正师太  时间:2021-02-04 21:36:53
五七绝对联体诗

刚刚14:22,午睡醒来,想到,绝句是四句,每一句的字数是相等的。为什么不可以是长短句呢?长短句也就变成词了。
我想写长短句,就叫五七绝对联体诗吧。

罗志海
2021年2月3日14:40


诗酒的魅力

眺月银盘亮
瞻梅雪谷香
杯杯盏盏酒文化
字字词词诗韵行

格律体新诗 ● 五七绝罗志海著译
第11336首对联体诗 2021年2月3日


The Charm Of Poetry And Wine.

Watch the plums and the snowy gully is fragrance
Look at the moon and the silver palte is bright
Cups and Glasses are the culture of wine
Words and phrases are the poetry rhymes

Metric New Poetry ● Five-Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 11,336th Two Pairs of Couplets, 2/3/2021
楼主:不正师太  时间:2021-02-04 21:36:53
五七绝对联体诗
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刚刚14:22,午睡醒来,想到,绝句是四句,每一句的字数是相等的。为什么不可以是长短句呢?长短句也就变成词了。
我想写长短句,就叫五七绝对联体诗吧。
2021年2月3日14:22-14:40


Five-Seven Words Of Quatrains Of Two Pares Of Couplets
by Luo Zhihai

Just at 14:22, I woke up from a nap and thought that quatrains are four sentences, and the number of words in each sentence is equal. Why not long and short sentences? Long and short sentences become lyrics.
If I want to write long and short sentences, it's called the Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets.
Beijing Time 20:50-21:00,2/3/2021 Transalted


诗酒的魅力

眺月银盘亮
瞻梅雪谷香
杯杯盏盏酒文化
字字词词诗韵行

格律体新诗 ● 罗志海著译
第1首五七绝对联体诗 2021年2月3日


The Charm Of Poetry And Wine.

Watch the plums and the snowy gully is fragrance
Look at the moon and the silver palte is bright
Cups and Glasses are the culture of wine
Words and phrases are the poetry rhymes

Metric New Poetry by Luo Zhihai, 2/3/2021
The 1th Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets

北京时间2021年2月3日15:20至15:40,罗志海写诗翻译

楼主:不正师太

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